this text? is grammar ok?

please let me know if the grammar is ok:

Owning a Digital Camera is very common nowadays. Even mobile phones have built-in digital cameras. Consumers community started asking for mobile phone built-in digital cameras in the early 2000s: and they obtained it from all of the major producers, like Sony, Kodak, Samsung etc. As time passed, the digital cameras were developed, they started, for example, having image stabilization. This helped a lot sinking the image blur and taking apparent pictures became much simpler for everyone. That was a fantastic achievement for the consumers too: the average digital camera user, isn't a professional photographer, so the digital camera must be simple to use. Another business the users really liked, was the autofocus. Normal cameras require the photographer background the focus manually. The autofocus does it automatically, it measures the distance between the camera's sensor and the target, and focuses accordingly. There are many different kinds of digital cameras for every kind of user. The cheapest category is called "Consumer level", and it consists of simple and simple to use digital cameras. These ones are the most appreciated by the average users, since they're reasonably simple and effective. The second category is called "Prosumer level." More expensive cameras are into this category, as they feature high-quality materials and settings. Better quality lens have a fantastic impact on the overall price. The zooming power is also a very vital feature. The average zooming power is 3x-4x, but most of the prosumer level digital cameras have 10 to 15x zoom. This allows the photographer to take stills of far away subjects with less effort. The third and last category is the "Pro", which stands for professional, and it is mainly for the professional photographers. This kind of digital cameras feature the top materials. They usually have high Megapixel resolution, wide angle lens and a lot of zooming power,up to 25x.

Answer by Sandy Peters
In the second line: “Consumers community started asking for mobile phone built-in digital cameras in the early 2000s” you need to add an apostrophe to the word consumers.

In this sentence: “More expensive cameras are into this category, as they feature high-quality materials and settings” Sounds incorrect, what are the cameras into?
Exchange it to “more expensive cameras FIT into this category”

Additional than that, no probs

Answer by Jodyanne
There are a lot of grammatical errors. The apostrophe was mentioned on Consumer’s–also the later: never start a sentence with as, that, this allows the photographer—is not assess use The zoom allows the photographer instead. Rather than say This kind of digital cameras feature top materials which doesn’t make sense as a sentence on its’ own, try saying something like: Digital camera’s feature high quality material which make them more expensive because of the high mega pixel resolution, innumerable lenses and high zoom in and out powers. Hope this helps. This the second last line…do not start the sentence with this as if no one knows what you may be talking about.

Answer by Bill Miller
Small answer: NO. I see several errors. Just FYI, most spell checks in word processors also contain grammatical checks as well. There’s even a spelling/grammar check on this site, so you should run it through that first.

I’ll try to assess a couple of your errors, but don’t consider this thorough. Check your capitalization. There are several capitalization errors. You should only capitalize proper nouns. Things like digital camera or megapixel should not be capitalized. I would exchange the first sentence to, “Owning a digital camera is now very common.” Nowadays seems too informal for an essay, especially since that’s your thesis statement. Is Consumer’s Community some type of consumer’s group? If so, both words should be capitalized. If not, drop the word community so that it reads, “Consumers started asking for mobile phones with built-in cameras in the early 2000s”. Also, your use of a colon immediately later this phrase is incorrect. You should any use a comma or drop the word ‘and’ and use a semicolon. Drop the comma after producers. Use a period after the word developed, and start your next sentence immediately after.

There are many many more errors that I can see scanning over the choice. I would highly recommend looking over all of your punctuation and capitalization use. There are several unneeded commas and colons you should remove. Also, try to cut out unnecessary phrases like “a lot.” Try to reckon of synonyms or use an online thesaurus. The entire business needs to be edited and rewritten. Most of the sentences contain errors.

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Digital camera

So, me and my friends are all really into the show of America’s Next Top Model. I was thinking about doing a theme get-collectively with all-ANTM. I want to replicate, or play, the show with my friends. How should I go about with it? What kind of photoshoots should we do? I’m only 12 and so are my friends so we don’t have fancy gear like lights and stuff. But, I do have a 10.1 MP digital camera and Adobe Photoshop CS2 which i can do some things on. If photos require photoshop, please clarify how to edit the photo the way that you want it to be edited. Please help!!!!!!!!!

Answer by Pooky
You need a camera that can work in the tethered mode–this way, when you click the shutter release button, the image appears on the computer screen merely a second or so later.

My List camera can do this (have used it twice–rather a pain to set up)–but I know some models of Nikon, does, too.

Photoshop CS2 does not really control the camera. It’s the program that comes with your camera that communicates with it.

I prefer to use Adobe Lightroom to sort through a lot of photos (see http://www.flickr.com/photos/little_pooky/2315292548/ ) than Photoshop. I suppose Adobe Join will work for you for now.

If you can’t have that set up, you have to obviously remove the memory card and read the files with your computer.

See here:

http://www.adobe.com/harvest/photoshoplightroom/ Click on VIEW THE FEATURE TOUR–it has some cool poses!

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